"Between the time"
Between the time
Tick Tok
Tick Tok
You are on your way
To fulfill your desire
To achieve a mission
The demanding success
Between the time
You are just a player
The game of prejudiced
Being told what to do!
what to be! How to act!
How about your own identity
Never being developed
or actually being discovered
Between the time
You might get hurt
of your own mistake
People never ever wonder
How pathetic and miserable
is it to reach until this level
You must struggle
Just to get self satisfaction
or precisely; others perception
Between the time
You might get lost
of actually what to gain
in this piteous world.
Is it the only path?
the only way?
Am I stuck at the end?
Or this way leads
to another way?
To other world
That never be seen?
Between the time
You might get confused!
Of who you are now
Devoting yourself
all the responsibility
that burdens you
Causing you to forget
what is it like to be human
The mankind with feeling
Sense of empathy towards others
To help them, to guide them
Not just your beloved one
How about the "other" brothers
Between the time
You can't even differentiate
between the rocks and diamond
between reality and fantasy
and between living and dying
The world may be mean to you
Cruel enough to make you think
that nobody understands me
nobody can helps me
nobody with me!
Between the time
You might find the
emptiness inside;
at the bottom of your soul
even now you are superb
of your own temptation
even you are surrounded by
all the person you loves
so much until your end
It is so complex feeling
To describe how hollow;
barren; blank; and desolate
your heart is
because there is only one thing!
Between the time
The one thing
That could change you
Becoming who you suppose to be
Eliminating and deleting
the world stereotype
The one thing that can lead to the peace
Between the time
It is not to late
Slowly; even pacing with all determination
Longing for the feeling of devoted
All you have to do is to seek
Might be the last temptation after all
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Alhamdulilllah!
When I was in secondary school, I keep on wondering about all of
the poem in the syllabus written by Shakespeare;
"Tomorrow...tomorrow...tomorrow"
I wonder what was the exact message?
Why did he write that?
What if actually there is a hidden message?
How can he write such a great poem?
and become masterpiece of his own?
Wow!
In my point of view, the writer has express all of his feelings and thoughts
As a reader, I never understand what the message are. ( laughing )
But,
It is all ups to the reader and philosopher to interpret the poem
Either good or bad
Either beneficial or not
Finally! I have written my first poem. Not really a poem. But I want it to be
my poem. >.<
Genuinely from me as someone who loves to share my thought. No doubt,
I need to practice more by using precise word.
Well, I leave it to your own interpretation
I need to practice more by using precise word.
Well, I leave it to your own interpretation
Feeling it!
Enjoy it!
Figure it out!
There is a hidden message there.
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